Cold Cores In The Mouth Is This Poem Any Good??

Is this poem any good?? - cold cores in the mouth

I saw your face
I fell in love
We hopped on the basis of
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I began to love you
then turned
She pulled me in the middle
It is a holy day

the gun in his mouth
and pull the tigger
My flight to the South
bitter taste

What's Next
I feel lost me
How could you break the vow
I was caught by frost

so cold inside
im afraid to love
WOW, that's me on the tower
I fall high

Marr Garhett